FijiOn one early Thursday morning my family and the Wallace family were going to Fiji. It was still very dark. First we got a bus but it was mini. In the bus the Wallace’s were in there. When we got there we had to unpack the bags. Then we got a wheeler to put the bags on. I was the driver. Then we went in this line to show our passports. Next we got breakfast because our stomachs were rumbling. I had McDonalds so did keegan. Peter and Cleo had subway.
Then we got on our plane. It was a long ride. Then we got out of our plane and went to the port. Well we were there we had lunch with the Wallace’s, arnotts and the nowacki’s. We had a ferry coming to take me and the Wallace’s to Mana Island. When we got there we went down a ramp. There were people singing. First we went in the pool. Cleo and I jumped in the pool. In the middle of the pool there was a diving area where Cleo and I jumped off. It was getting dark so we hoped out of the pool and went to dinner. I had a spectacular feast. After all our dinners we go to the kids club so the mums and dads have dinner in peace well we were there we played on the play grounds.
We had a great time in fiji
What a wonderful holiday you all had in sunny Fiji. I like the way you wrote in paragraphs and used a variety of sentence starters. Well done Jas!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful recount, Jas. I like the way you used lots of interesting words and phrases. I liked the way you talked about your rumbling tummy and the way you explained that you had a spectacular feast. Great language!
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Wow Jaz! Great story and yes it was an awesooooome holiday. Cleo is very pleased that she got a mention in the story too!! Where are we going together next year???!! Cam
ReplyDeleteYou must've had a fun time in Fiji! :)
ReplyDeletewow awesome recount jazzy with the snorkling and stuff.I wonder what you were doing when i wasnt looking at kidsclub.:0?????
ReplyDeleteI think I am going again next year. I have my fingers crossed we will go to mana island again. I went to mana island 2 years ago. On our way back from Castaway island my sister and I saw a old kids club teacher. I can't remember his name though. I wish I could remember more of my Fiji holiday. I can also remember this... That my friend Tane and Charlotte were there. Tane and I went lizard and Gecko hunting till Tane had to go to America. Then I went to kids club for the remaining nighs and days. I liked how you also included Peter and Cleo. In the breakfast bit I went in the koru lounge for breakfast. My family got the tickets from completing a really hard puzzle. It was a Air New Zealand gift. I hope I also go to the island you go too like Mr Wallace said were are we going together next year???
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Ryan